We have been working in pairs to
create a narrative story. We talk to our
buddy to get our ideas in our head and then we write, creating a picture in the
readers head. We need to have a
character, setting, problem and solution.
Here are some of the stories written…
The Talking Treasure Chest by Harvey
Once upon a
time there was a talking treasure chest.
His name was Ruby Sword. He was rich indeed. He always shows off. He was very friendly. His friends were called Harvey and
Teina. His house smells like rotten
eggs. He lived in a forest. He had a house made out of diamonds. His friends knocked on the door. “Hello,” his friends shouted. The talking treasure chest house smelled
really bad. “What’s the smell?” “It’s my
house” replied the talking treasure chest.
His house sounds like people running inside. After a while they went outside. They had marshmallows on the beach. They could not find their way home, they were lost. They saw a house and
knocked on the door. Knock, knock,
knock. “Come in,” the person said. They
came in but then… it was a witch. “I
will eat you.” “NO WAY” They kicked the
witch into the fire. The witch that was
going to eat the three people in her house.
They found the way home and lived happily ever after.
Polar Bear by Roy
Our polar
Bear likes to eat snow and fish. He
looks white and he looks like a fuzzy ball.
He is fat. His best, best friend
is black. His other friend is
brown. He plays in the snow as
well. He likes his friends lots. He found and apple orchard. It smelled like rotten apples with ants in
it. He was chucking apples around. They were splatting on the wall. Then….. an ant yelled “wiho!!. I am in the apple orchard.” Then the polar Bear squashed him. The polar Bear was stuck because the farmer
old him off. The polar bear was scared. So the polar Bear just ate him. Gobble, gobble, gobble.
Horse by Emily
Once upon a
time there lived a brown horse. The
horse had white patches and blue eyes, a long black tail and a black mane. She lived in a haunted house. It had ghosts, witches and spiders. AAAAAaaaaaaaaah! Scary. It smells like witches stew and rat
pooh, yuk! It sounds “echo-y”. It looks black and dark and it feels slimy
and sticky. I wouldn’t live in
there! But the only problem was it kept
getting caught on fire, so she decided to buy a new one. The new house was sparkling and clean. In her old house the flames were burning
higher and higher. The flames were orange, yellow and red.
Top Cat by Juel
Once upon a
time there was a cat and his name is Top Cat.
He is a cat that had black dots all over himself. His back paws were clean and sparkly and the
front were dirty and muddy. He said “I
need to get more clothes.” So he got his shoes on and out the door he
went. On the way to the store he sa a
building site. It sounds like a driller
drilling something in. It looks like
it’s going to fall down on him. It
smells like wood chips. Then he saw
everything is frozen, so he grabbed wood from the building site and made a
fire.
Talking Treasure Chest by Teina
Once upon a
time there was a talking treasure chest.
His name was ruby Sword. He
looked friendly. He sounds like
treasure. He feels hard and he is
friendly. He is very big filled with
diamonds, money and rubies. He smells good. He lived in a forest. He lives in a diamond house. It looks very sparkling. It smells very god. It sounds like crying. He feels good every day. Every time he walks out of is house he gets
frightened by his brother. Then he got
lost. Then he notes his foot
prints. So he followed his foot prints
all the way home. He found his brother and they had fun with each other.
Spider-pig By Hayley
Once upon a
time there was a spider with a pig face.
He is a spider pig. But he is an
evil pig. He has little red spooky
eyes. He sounds like a spooky, creaky
house. He has very white teeth! The spider pig lived in the bottom of the
sea. The sea was so smooth that he could
float on the top of the water. The water
smelt like salty water. He liked the
wishy-washy sound of the waves. He likes
the sea. He makes a lot of friends in
the sea. He eats sea weed and sand. But it never stopped raining. Oh No! How could I make the rain stop? I know how, I’ll swim under a big rock. Aha!
